Comments on: water birth http://www.magpiedays.com/2008/05/water-birth/ Hoarding the shiny moments. Mon, 06 Oct 2008 15:02:07 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Jennifer http://www.magpiedays.com/2008/05/water-birth/#comment-9 Jennifer Fri, 16 May 2008 09:30:20 +0000 http://www.magpiedays.com/?p=21#comment-9 Linda and Jan - I was worried about the last lines being ambiguous, as I read this a certain way, but it sounds like a little ambiguity is not necessarily a bad thing. Thanks. Carolee - I can't take credit for the blog design. It's by Randa Clay; her link is at the bottom of my page. But it fits perfectly with my title, which I decided on before I found this design. Thanks for stopping by. Gautami - I've been popping by your site on and off since the Poetry Thursday days. Thanks for stopping by. Linda and Jan - I was worried about the last lines being ambiguous, as I read this a certain way, but it sounds like a little ambiguity is not necessarily a bad thing. Thanks.

Carolee - I can’t take credit for the blog design. It’s by Randa Clay; her link is at the bottom of my page. But it fits perfectly with my title, which I decided on before I found this design. Thanks for stopping by.

Gautami - I’ve been popping by your site on and off since the Poetry Thursday days. Thanks for stopping by.

]]> By: jan http://www.magpiedays.com/2008/05/water-birth/#comment-8 jan Thu, 15 May 2008 03:22:58 +0000 http://www.magpiedays.com/?p=21#comment-8 i love your imagery in this, and, the ambiguity at the end, regarding your 'drowning'. are you happy? are you feeling overwhelmed? very nice, and of course, interesting as well! i love your imagery in this, and, the ambiguity at the end, regarding your ‘drowning’. are you happy? are you feeling overwhelmed? very nice, and of course, interesting as well!

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://www.magpiedays.com/2008/05/water-birth/#comment-7 gautami tripathy Wed, 14 May 2008 02:56:11 +0000 http://www.magpiedays.com/?p=21#comment-7 Simply marvellous! <a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/05/child-to-love-read-write-poemmonday.html" rel="nofollow">child to love?</a> Simply marvellous!

child to love?

]]> By: carolee http://www.magpiedays.com/2008/05/water-birth/#comment-6 carolee Tue, 13 May 2008 21:38:08 +0000 http://www.magpiedays.com/?p=21#comment-6 this is beautiful! (and i love your blog design) this is beautiful! (and i love your blog design)

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://www.magpiedays.com/2008/05/water-birth/#comment-5 Linda Jacobs Tue, 13 May 2008 14:34:44 +0000 http://www.magpiedays.com/?p=21#comment-5 I like the ambiguous nature of the repetitions at the end. It could mean you are drowning in love. It could mean a part of you drowns because now you'll have to take care of a child and put your own wants aside. All the images are fresh! I like the ambiguous nature of the repetitions at the end. It could mean you are drowning in love. It could mean a part of you drowns because now you’ll have to take care of a child and put your own wants aside.

All the images are fresh!

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